Newest poem

Hey guys, here's the newest poem I wrote for my poetry class.

Final Goodbyes
A searing pain
runs through my brain
leaving me paralyzed
I lay in bed
thoughts racing in my head
avoiding final goodbyes
I feel such a shame
from life's wasted game
with so much left unsaid
I can't comprehend
the way this will all end
her soul is already so dead
There was so much I hated
and so much wasn't appreciated
she had so much love to give
And as I watch her sleep
I can hear the monitors beep
as sickness takes her body captive
I start to yell
crying "why this awful hell?"
but I never get an answer
I scream to God "why?"
as her soul starts to fly
she's lost her body to cancer
--written 11/1/06